I finished my (crappy) first draft of a story on Saturday night. It was about 4,500 words longer than I'd like. Now it's only 3,400 words too long. One scene. 1,100 words. 1,100 hard won words. Gone.
So I keep asking, is there anything so sweet as the first cut?
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A death of a thousand cuts is sweetest when the cuts enliven a narrative. I assume "cut" means more than excise, strike out, remove, but rather cutting to refine, polish, strengthen and clarify. Then there's also cut as in cinema transitions, which also have written word parallels: jump cuts, matching cuts, and bookend cuts.
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I just had to hack an entire ending off my story that I am otherwise quite happy with. It was a shame, because the ending had three or four fun, clever lines in it, but it wasn't working in a big picture sense.
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From a certain point of view, all writing is an "indulgence."
Yeah, kill your darlings and all that, I know.
But sort of like how a germaphobe can sterilize themselves into sickness, you don't want to kill ALL the darlings and leave not but a blasted wasteland...
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