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Hi, I've got a chapter or two done that I'm quite happy with but have noone to read it and give their opinion. So was wondering whether anybody would be prepared to have a look at it and give me their reaction please?
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I would love to read your first chapter. My critisms tend to be more coherence and point of view related, but I can spot a few grammatical errors.
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have you checked out criter yet or Online writer's workshop? both places can get you crits on your work, provided you are willing to crit other's work.
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Send it to me. I'm a bit slow on crits - probably a two week turn around - but they tend to be detailed. I'll send you part of Falcon later today.
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