I'm looking for an interested party to read a 4.5 literary short story. It's written in second-person present tense and deals with some pretty lurid subject matter. Typically, if anyone is familiar with my other stories, they'll know what to expect. I'd also like to have people read it who don't normally read the genre in which I write in and give me their perspective on it too.

I've had some feedback on it already, which was really helpful, and which sparked my interest in getting more opinions.