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Spaceman
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Okay, here's the deal--I reviewed somebody's flash fiction from the clue on that other web site. I had never seen the clue, so she sent me the picture of the bike on the rollercoaster. Even though it's not a part of the contest, I decided to write a short-short based on the picture.

I'll post the first paragraph and if anyone wants to review the whole thing, I'll forward it.

note: This piece is written in present tense. 525 Words

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My name is Jem, and I can fly. I didn't always know how, but after my mommy flew away, I discovered I have this secret power. All I do is sit on my bicycle and the faster I pedal, the higher I fly. Someday, I'm going to fly to her.
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Beth
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the flash challenge that wouldn't stop!

ok, I'll read it.


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