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This one was hard, wasn't it? Took me a while and some creative grammar to get one sentence that would have a chance of placing. I hope that the grammar lesson I learned here concerning semi-colons is correct, and that the folks at Every Writer agree that it is one sentence.
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All right. I did it anyway. It's probably as boring as the picture.
quote:Alex groaned, thinking about how nice it would be to slip back into the hot tub with Roxanne, while the salesman droned on and clicked through yet another picture of a perfect skiier on a perfect slope on a perfect day in the perfect time-share condo deal.
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There's something about careening uncontrollably down a mountainside on two skinny finberglass twigs; it screams in your face that you're breathing.
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