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Topic: You are all in Maine
Little_Doctor
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Member # 6635
posted March 03, 2005 09:53 PM
Acceptable. It doesn't have to rhyme. It just has to have minor spelling changes, and a link.
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Raia
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posted March 04, 2005 02:24 AM
Haha, Hester, you pick up on things quickly. Welcome to Hatrack, as I've said.
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Bokonon
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posted March 04, 2005 09:53 AM
Not bad at all. Though a "true" Dobie would more closely tie into the title (showing a picture of Maine doesn't show that we are all in it). Good first effort though. -Bok
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HesterGray
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posted March 04, 2005 10:35 AM
quote: (showing a picture of Maine doesn't show that we are all in it) Yes, I see your point. I'll try better next time.
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Jay
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posted March 04, 2005 10:47 AM
And in your dobie you wouldn’t ask if it is. You want to be natural. Discus it after a few posts. I personally don’t understand the “you must have a link” rule. I think that depends on the dobie. But not bad at all.
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