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Scott R
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Ender and I
Surf forever in a rocket,
The way Peter and I
Surfed the web.

No Demosthenes here,
No Locke locked in starflight,
No Bugs on the windshield,
Just he.
And I.

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Dan_raven
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I sought my God in Ender
I sought my God real hard
Who'd of thought my creator
Was some guy named OS Card?

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Lady Jane
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My brother breathes threats in the night;
My other brother cries.
My fingers type to serve the first
While the latter's spirit dies.

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While walking in the woods alone
I found a squir-rabbit, staked to the ground
Eviscerated from it's head to it's heart
My brother is evil and knows no bound.

[So Valentine is bad at identifying small furry animals as well as poetry.]

[ February 15, 2005, 10:26 AM: Message edited by: imogen ]

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Scott R
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It was a squirrel, I think.
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Dan_raven
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@#$@#@#$@# critics.
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Lady Jane
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(Found by Valentine in her mother's room)

The battleroom waits for him
They won't let me come
Survival will rest on him
My little third son.

To satisfy government voices we made
Andrew, my baby, so solemn and grave
He knows he was wanted for he might be
"Please tell him he's treasured
Please promise." "Daily."

When can I stop thinking about where he is?
When can I stop crying
Stop reaching
For him.
I have to let go
He's gone from our home
I have to let go
Like Hannah, I'm alone.

My Ender, my baby
You were born out of love
Forgive me, my baby
You're too far above.

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I can not talk to the germs
Or understand their Other
Its like the time I tried to think
Like my elder brother.

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That Petra's after Enders Heart
I really want to Mug 'er.
But if she is the one for him
Better Petra than a Bugger.

[ February 15, 2005, 11:30 AM: Message edited by: T_Smith ]

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Scott R
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This thread is part of the Grand Jatraquero Poetry Bump.

:bump:

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