But I'm cool with the extended deadline too. The more the merrier.Mailing Format: Email to scottdbenttree [at] hotmail.com with "First 13" and your Hatrack Nick in the subject line. (This will allow me to run a search through my email.)
The polls will close the following Tuesday at approx. noon, with results posted that evening.
Rules:
• You can begin the story from any chronological part of the synopsis.
• Ensure it is only 13 lines. Read this thread for instructions on how to be certain.
• Any details not specified in the plan can be made up as long as they do not SERIOUSLY alter the story.
• Include all italic and bold formatting code in the text so the moderator can just cut and paste the text when he/she posts them.
• Remember, this contest is ABOUT mastering the hook--so have one.
• When you have finished email it to the moderator (by WEDNESDAY). The moderator will then assign it a number and record the authors name next to it. The moderator will then post it with the number only, not the name, in a separate thread from the story outline thread as he/she receives them.
*PLEASE don’t look at what other people have done until after you have sent yours to the moderator.*
• Edit your work before sending it—no corrections will be made after it has been emailed, and email it only once. Put your HATRACK name at the top of the 13 lines, the moderator will remove it before he posts it, replacing it with a number.
• From Thursday onward voting/analysis can begin. Vote for the first, second, and third place entries, as well as best title. Winner is judged to the the entry accumulating the most points given that a first place vote is worth 3 points, a second place vote is worth 2 points, and a third place vote is worth 1 point. Title contest is strictly majority rules. **No voting for yourself**
Then a new moderator volunteers (it’s not much work--unless you consider creating the outline difficult) and then we start again.
Future moderators
1) Doctor
2) Tiergan
3) illiterate
4) skadder.
5) Annepin.
6) JustInProse
Synopsis:
quote:
Sebastian Conte is the very successful founder and CEO of Verundi, an interstellar company that manufactures navigational components for spacecraft primarily, but also has an interesting weapons factory.While gambling on vacation with his friend and head weapon designer, Bishop, They meet a peculiar Berian fellow, that offers them an expedition opportunity on VOS, a unhospitable planet of giant creatures.
Sebastion is reluctant, although Berians are a trustworthy race, but the gung ho, Bishop, persuades him to go on what could be the adventure of a lifetime.
But Sebastion's fears are justified, because on Vos, they are abandoned by their guide, to fend for themselves against harsh conditions and dinosaur like creatures. OH Yeah... It appears the guide also booked another hunting trip, because they are being hunted by a group of Dtydactlyns, the cunning predatory race that has been in conflict with humans and other sentient races for centuries.
Can Bishops new weapon save them? I will leave that up to you.
Happy hunting!
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Future moderators
1) Doctor
2) Tiergan
3) illiterate
4) skadder.
5) Annepin.
6) JustInProse
7) Wolfe_boy
Nice outline Bent Tree.... straight up action, reminds me a lot of The Most Dangerous Game. Expect an entry from me.
Jayson Merryfield
June 7th is a saturday.
Do we have to have it in on june 7th or the wednesday after..?
Wednesday the 4th
Jayson Merryfield
Anyways, my suggestion for an updated timeline is Outline due Wednesday, Week 1. Entries due Wednesday Week 2, so still only one week to write. Voting for one week, deadline Tuesday Week 3, and Wedneaday Week 3 the next outline comes up. Hopefully we'll get an increase in participation with onyl one task at hand at a time.
So, according to my proposed timeline Doctor, you're about two weeks away.
Jayson Merryfield
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Maybe some will have an easier time coming up with 13 lines from the next synopsis. This is a difficult synopsis, because it has many possible starting points, but almost none in which all of the elements can be mentioned. It almost seemed like it had a couple of false starts, and the protagonist's motivation seems unclear. So, some are bound to find difficulties with it.
I don't think it's any kind of an insult if there are more for the next synopsis (one man's trash is another man's treasure).
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If I had been asked (as one of the on-time submitters), I would have said its okay to just post the two submissions and allow feedback but skip the voting. Heck, more feedback that way But I'm cool with the extended deadline too. The more the merrier.
If anyone is having issues like IB outlined, heck, just pick whatever appeals and play with it. We saw a lot of variation in the last challenge.
If it Makes everything smoother we can do as you proposed, all you need is one more yeah, as there are now three entries. What say you all?
I don't know if it will be an applicable analogy, but when you practice in a band (A band, not just band) if you miss a note, chord, riff or beat, you don't stop everything, you just move on until everyone gets in synch. Everyone may not sink the measure, but, more than likely, they will the next.
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If there are few participants when you are mod--so be it. If the next week there are loads, it not necessarily to do with your synopsis. It should be something you can dip in and out of as a participant. the important thing is to keep it going.
Moderators need to remember to close the competition, close the voting, post the scores--and file the winner on capt Hook's Roll of Honour.
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I like the idea of having each challenge last two weeks--one week to write, one week to critique.
For thirteen lines??!!! A week to write 13 lines??!!! Wow. Too slow for me. I want to write something else during the week--not to overwrite those lines--something I'm shooting for publication with. These contests (as previously stated) are to get and keep us writing. Two weeks to write and read 13 lines has the opposite effect, on me.
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No worries, its all good.
But do we have to trudge? I prefer a brisk pace, swinging strides, wind in my hair.
I suppose we could Glide 