Anyone who has read all the stories that posted their 13 lines may vote as of tomorrow.
All add my votes and tally Nov. 1st.
Sorry if I misunderstood the deadlines, but I just re-read the first post and am pretty sure Nov 7 was the deadline we talked about.
I figured that with NaNoWriMo coming up, everyone would want this resolved sooner.
Last day is as originally planned: Nov. 7th.
Hope I voted in the right format...
Now for my votes:
1. Tacos of the Apocalypse by BoredCrow
2. The Third Rule by InarticulateBabbler
3. Taco by Tigertinite
Actually, I was tied for third place, so I'm going to say, KayTi, I'm giving your story an Honourable Mention, if that's alowed, and well done to all the others; this was very difficult.
I'll be sending out my critiques later today.
Those of you who sent stories out on the 31st should have received my story today. If I've missed anyone please let me know.
Cheers,
Paat
A lot of you misunderstood and thought that the story either had to include, or had to be about the trigger phrase. For future challenges, this is not so. A trigger is a source. Think about the words (any one or all three) and what they bring to mind, and then go off in any direction you're inspired to. Sometimes--like word association--it can lead to completely different ideas. Sometimes those idea will cannibalize other, previous story-ideas and create something bigger and better. There's no wrong way to use a trigger. You can include or base the story on the trigger, but you don't have to.
That said, and without further adieu, my votes are:
1) halogen - Sanitation Blues
2) KayTi - Apocalyptic Taco Mix v3
3) Bored Crow - Tacos of the Apocalypse
Good luck to all.
[Edited for typo: can you believe I misspelled bigger? Just thought I'd share ]
[Edited to add:]
My honorable mention would be tigertinite - Taco, because the disturbing images were very potent. They are still kicking around my head. After the voting, I intend to comment on all the stories' strong points.
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1. "Apocalyptic Taco Mix" by Vanderbleek
2. The Third Rule by InarticulateBabbler
3. "Apocalyptic Taco Mix"-Kayti
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I was barely able to write a word during October; those that I did, were for my 'Taco Mix' story. I had thought, because of that, I would be unable to write my NaNo story too, but the wonderful stories I have read for this competition have truly inspired me to write, so I want to say a huge thank you for that, to everyone who entered a story. Thank you all!
darklight, I'm glad that you wrote for this competition. Thank you. And, I'm glad that you could get some inspiration from this. Keep at it.
Here's my vote:
1 - Tacos of the Apocalypse - BoredCrow
2 - Apocalyptic Taco Mix - KayTi
3 - The Third Rule - InarticulateBabbler
And, honourable mention to Darklight.
Cheers,
Pat
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1)"Sanitation Blues" - halogen
2)"Tacos and Freshman Year" - Mauvemuse
3)"Apocalyptic Taco Mix v3" - KayTi
I had a hard time deciding for third place, and my honorable mention goes to IB.
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1. Tacos of the Apocalypse - BoredCrow
2. Sanitation Blues - Halogen
3. Taco - Tigertnite
Nice work, everyone, really nice work. It was hard to choose just three. I'll be sending out crits in a minute. And, by the way, when my arms ache tomorrow because I have to put in 5k words to make up for my nano deficit today...I'll be thinking about all of you!
All of them were really good stories!
Oh, dear. I'm sorry about the timing guys. So here's my vote-->
1-halogen-Sanitation Blues
2-meg.stout- Crying
3-InarticulateBlabber-the Third Rule
Although everyone's were amazing
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Sorry! Had a car accident and someone close to me is getting a divorce (physical abuse and other assorted ugliness).
Feel free to tally votes without me, though I'll try to post tomorrow.
Ciao!
P.S. - my screen was just showing me as having editing privileges on all the posts... but I promise I didn't edit my story into anyone else's post.
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1st Place with 6 votes goes to KayTi - Apocalyptic Taco Mix V3
Tied at 2nd Place, with 5 votes apiece are - halogen - Sanitary Blues & InarticulateBabbler - The Third Rule (Boy, it's wierd writing yourself in third-person.)
3rd Place with 4 votes goes to BoredCrow - Tacos of the Apocalypse
Thanks to all who competed. Again, everyone that completed the challenge is a winner. I hope that all the stories get cleaned up and polished, and submitted to market, and I wish you all luck.
I hope to see as many turn out for the next Trigger Challenge. Which brings me to:
KayTi, Congratulations!!!
I look forward to the topic with your trigger.
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Sorry! Had a car accident and someone close to me is getting a divorce (physical abuse and other assorted ugliness).
That's horrible. I hope you're okay. Too bad about the friend's unfortunate situation. Take all the time you need.
If we can manage a 1st draft/Trigger Challenge once or twice a month, we can build up the amount of stories we can polish and submit. Once again, the purpose is to keep writers writing. In fact, I've given serious thought to mixing some of the Liberty Hall (90 minute) Flash Challenges into one longer story. The angles this can be good from are unlimited.
I'm now looking forward to the next challenge. KayTi, I can't wait to see what you come up with!
If you haven't already, please be sure to get critiques to the writers. We learn as much from receiving critiques as we do from writing or critting others, in my opinion. I sent all mine out, so if you didn't receive mine it's because of an email glitch. Let me know so I can resend it.
I will work on another trigger. I hope to have something up before Thanksgiving. I think it can be helpful to have goals during the busy holiday months to keep momentum going.
Thanks again, I am deeply honored. Congratulations to everyone. No matter what else - the world is 10 stories richer for our challenge!
But meanwhile, Skadder has a sub-1000 word challenge he wants to run so I think I will hold off on a new trigger for a short story challenge until after the holidays. Is that OK with everyone? I want to give ppl the max chance to participate, and I think once we get another week or two into Dec it gets hard. Plus, I suspect a few of us might be working on WOTF entries...