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Posted by skadder (Member # 6757) on :
*[This message has been deleted due to lack of talent by Kathleen Woodbury Daltoon (edited January 23, 2009).]
[This message has been edited by skadder (edited January 23, 2009).]
Posted by Kathleen Dalton Woodbury (Member # 59) on :
Hey, don't blame me. Though spelling my name wrong does make it funny.
Posted by skadder (Member # 6757) on :
I changed my mind...it was rubbish intro. Spelling your name wrong made it okay!
Posted by Kathleen Dalton Woodbury (Member # 59) on :
Oh. Well, happy to be of service -- I think.
Posted by snapper (Member # 7299) on :
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I think you could improve this with a little emotion
#%&@!
Hope this helps.
Posted by annepin (Member # 5952) on :
This is pretty funny, skadder, considering the title of your piece!
Posted by sjsampson (Member # 8075) on :
Agreed. I would read on.