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Posted by nitewriter (Member # 3214) on :
 
Thanks pip. I see the point, "ease" was a typo but even the intended "eased" is the wrong word. "Squeezed" would do nicely. What happens though is much more than just plinking border varmints - of course how could you know that from the first 13 lines.
Oooops! Ok, this shoulda been a reply, not a topic, sorry about that.

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