I have a 2500 word short scifi short story. Any help you can give is appreciated. this is the first sceen of the story. if you are interested let me know.
No one really knows how many systems were inhabited before the war. The remaining records are incomplete, though there are many legends, tales of decadence and the atrocities that go with it, tales of genetic codes so skewed as to produce human horrors unimaginable. So far in our search none of these legends have been substantiated. Numerous survey and exploratory ships have been sent out in search of the remnants of our once great star spanning civilization. Many devastated planets have been found and explored; a great leap in technology has come about as a result. Though we’ve come across nothing but ruins, we keep searching…searching for our past…searching for our brothers.
[This message has been edited by gt2it (edited June 25, 2003).]
Posted by Christine (Member # 1646) on :
I'll take a look at it, send it along. But I probably wont' get to it until this weekend.
Posted by Infyrno on :
Looks like a pretty nice story. Send it my way and I'll take a look.
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Posted by Kolona (Member # 1438) on :
I'm a little swamped, but since you're ready for submission, I can sympathize with you. Send a descriptive subject line so I'll know not to delete it.
Posted by Jules (Member # 1658) on :
That sounds like my kind of story. And I might have time to do some serious reading next week :-)
My address should be in my profile if you want to send it to me.
Posted by Kolona (Member # 1438) on :
If you sent the story, Gt2it, I never got it.
Posted by Survivor (Member # 213) on :
I could read it.
Posted by Sam (Member # 1716) on :
i would be willing to read it
Posted by Lord Darkstorm (Member # 1610) on :
I'll give it a try.
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Posted by Heresy (Member # 1629) on :
I'd like to give it a read too. archangelcmg@mac.com