Hatrack River Forum: HELP ME WITH THIS STORY! PLEASE?

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Posted by Synesthesia (Member # 4774) on :

Does anyone want to do an emergency critic of a story?
I have to mail it tomorrow, or maybe just have postmarked by Friday.

At least I have a second story that might suck a bit less.

HEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!

Posted by Flaming Toad on a Stick (Member # 9302) on :

Send it. I'll read it. flamingtoad_onastick at excite dot com.

Posted by Flaming Toad on a Stick (Member # 9302) on :

Reply sent.

Posted by Morbo (Member # 5309) on :

It may be too late, but I just emailed you to offer to critique your story.

Posted by Synesthesia (Member # 4774) on :

thanks. i'm entering another story, so you can critique this one if you want to. i am saving this one for the next contest and want to perfect it.