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Posted by CalvinMaker (Member # 2032) on :

It's about 700 words. If you're interested, please email me at CalvinMaker@philoticweb.net and I'll send the story to you.

Thanks
-Noah

(Btw, the story is diary entries from Lucifer's Diary.)